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GrampaSwood (talkcontribs)

(haha poopy)

Hi there,

The weapons are mentioned here, it mentions the stuff he would've actually used in space (seems to be escape plan/equalizer, eyelander, and buff banner).
GrampaSwood (talk) 16:46, 13 July 2020 (UTC)

ImJavert (talkcontribs)

thanks for the info, ill probably add something about him 'using' those shortly (doing a wave of semi-minor corrections using the advice ive been getting from Mikado). However with the 'statement about weapon disposal' i was referring to the previous bios assertion that the rocket was crashed to dispose of weapons which were being used in a different trial they gave no sources to, which i cant seem to find any evidence of? my guess was it was a misread of the [doomsday update page talking about a 'suitcase nuke full of recalled Mann Co. Australium', but thats just a guess.

Also slightly different topic but just though id try get some input from an experienced user, do you think maybe the continuity error between 'recalled Mann Co. Australium' and the Trial Transcript saying the government supplied the Australium is worthy of note/trivia somewhere, maybe the pyromania page or some such?

Thanks again!

GrampaSwood (talkcontribs)

I wouldn't say so, it just leads me to think that Saxton Hale calls it recalled Mann Co. Australium when it's actually government Australium.
GrampaSwood (talk) 17:25, 13 July 2020 (UTC)

Mikado282 (talkcontribs)

I really do appreciate you bringing more of the Miss Pauling responses into the Storyline content. I hope you see from my edits how to link the responses into the prose. An ongoing project of a couple editors is to reduce the synopsis and Trivia style of some of the present NPC entries. Synopses should be covered in the relevant Comic and Movie pages and those pages must be directly linked in the NPC articles. The Pauling responses are short enough to not need a Synopsis; links to them should speak for themselves.

Thanks,

M I K A D O 282 ⊙⊙⊙⊙⊙ ⊙⊙ ⊙⊙ (talk) (Help Wanted!) 13:40, 10 July 2020 (UTC)

ImJavert (talkcontribs)

Thanks for your feedback, I'll be sure to stick to this convention in future.

Mikado282 (talkcontribs)
Thanks for your feedback

Groovy!

Say, I agree with your comment about the God section, IIRC, too much Synopsis. I don't know particularly what I would do with it yet. I may do something with the Devil section tonight or tomorrow. He'll is actually a tangible place in TF2; the characters actually go there on missions. Moreover, the interaction with the Devil further details the Medic's backstory. In contrast, Scout's trip to Heaven might be interpreted as a a near death experience, unless the miraculous recovery shows otherwise. The, in the TF2 Storyline, Scout really is God's gift to women (regardless of any individual's opinion to the contrary).

If you want to collaborate in Steam Chat, you may add me.

M I K A D O 282 ⊙⊙⊙⊙⊙ ⊙⊙ ⊙⊙ (talk) (Help Wanted!) 23:36, 10 July 2020 (UTC)

ImJavert (talkcontribs)

Whoops, sorry for jumping the gun and editing god when I did, just thought about it earlier and did it without seeing this. Tried to see what your message said but I'm getting the feeling talk pages are a little buggy since every time I've gone to check replies a different number of them appear. Feel free to revert the changes or make your own. I'd love to collaborate, I'll send a request sometime soon then.

Mikado282 (talkcontribs)

" I'm getting the feeling talk pages are a little buggy since every time I've gone to check replies a different number of them appear."

The new talk pages are totally bugged; another reason I prefer Steam Chat for collaboration.

To read the new format, always go the top level of the Talk page (straight from the Discussion tab) then View History (yes that will be a horrible mess once you get more topics).

I am working on the God entry, slowly, little time to do so. I will leave commentary on the NPC Talk page because that one has the old, not-busted format.

M I K A D O 282 ⊙⊙⊙⊙⊙ ⊙⊙ ⊙⊙ (talk) (Help Wanted!) 23:20, 11 July 2020 (UTC)

GrampaSwood (talkcontribs)

Pictogram info.png Please make use of the Show preview button. It gives you a preview of the edit you are making, allowing you to perfect your changes before you save the page. You can edit the whole article by clicking the edit button at the top of the page, which is preferable to editing multiple sections consecutively.
GrampaSwood (talk) 10:48, 10 July 2020 (UTC)

ImJavert (talkcontribs)

Thank you for your help, although I have been using the button, and in that case would you recommend that for minor mistakes I wait until I have amassed a number of them in order to correct them all together? I'll attempt to keep to the whole article in future, however is there any way you would recommend keeping note of why changes were made when doing so? It seems like the edit summary wouldn't be long enough for an entire pages worth, or when editing such large amounts is a detailed summary not as necessary? Thanks again.

GrampaSwood (talkcontribs)

The point is more to edit the entire article, instead of editing each section individually. Mistakes happen, but make sure to read your changes carefully.
GrampaSwood (talk) 11:45, 10 July 2020 (UTC)

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