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- 02:35, 12 November 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-33) . . m Scout (More concise and without ending in a preposition.)
- 02:33, 12 November 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-15) . . m Scout (Rephrased to kill a run-on sentence.)
- 02:37, 20 August 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-59) . . m Australium (→History: It's not "self-referential" if Australia and Australium aren't the same thing. Making it read cleaner.)
- 21:23, 24 July 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+153) . . Glossary of player terms (→B: Changed the definition of back-cap to be correct and more closely resemble the actual content of the back-cap page.)
- 23:55, 11 September 2012 (diff | hist) . . (-1) . . m Scout (competitive) (→Common Tactics)
- 23:54, 11 September 2012 (diff | hist) . . (-1) . . m Community Demoman strategy (→Charge jumping: A million uses of "while" and a solitary "whilst" sticking out like a sore thumb.)
- 20:27, 10 September 2012 (diff | hist) . . (0) . . m Engineer (competitive) (→Common Tactics: "Whilst" is 1) needlessly archaic 2) used to indicate temporality, not contrasts.)
- 20:25, 10 September 2012 (diff | hist) . . (-6) . . m Damage (→Distance and randomness modifier)
- 20:23, 10 September 2012 (diff | hist) . . (-3) . . m Hightower (The more unncessary dependent clauses you use, the more sentences sound like gibberish. It also leads to incoherent phrases like "than to other")
- 20:22, 10 September 2012 (diff | hist) . . (-50) . . m Hightower
- 20:17, 10 September 2012 (diff | hist) . . (-135) . . Community Scout strategy (Redundant "jump a lot in combat" tips reduced to a single item and caveat included about the dangers of jumping in fights.)
- 20:08, 10 September 2012 (diff | hist) . . (-31) . . m Storyline (→Gravel War: Hale can't be the owner if Mann Co is a subisidary of TF. TF owns Mann Co. Hale runs the company in some unspecified capacity.)
- 20:04, 10 September 2012 (diff | hist) . . (-12) . . m Operation Steel Trap Badge
- 19:33, 15 August 2012 (diff | hist) . . (-1) . . m Community competitive play (→Dynamics)
- 19:21, 15 August 2012 (diff | hist) . . (-12) . . m Storyline (→Gravel War: The word you were looking for is "proprietary," but Saxton Hale is by definition not a proprietary owner if Mann Co is a subsidiary.)
- 19:16, 15 August 2012 (diff | hist) . . (+1) . . m Storyline (When we're talking comparisons and not temporal relationships, "though" is better than "while" or *shudder* "whilst." Also spelling.)
- 19:32, 9 January 2012 (diff | hist) . . (+1) . . m Community Demoman strategy (→Ali Baba's Wee Booties / Bootlegger: Sub point about losing ranged damage relates to using the loadout in normal mode. As presented it made it sound like Demo had ranged in Medi mode)
- 19:32, 9 January 2012 (diff | hist) . . (-1) . . Community Demoman strategy (→Ali Baba's Wee Booties / Bootlegger: Sub point about losing ranged damage relates to using the loadout in normal mode. As presented it made it sound like Demo had ranged in Medi mode)
- 19:29, 9 January 2012 (diff | hist) . . (+291) . . Talk:Full Moon (→Time Full Moons Start)
- 00:58, 31 October 2011 (diff | hist) . . (-11) . . m Eyeaduct (Something cannot be both "continuous" and "periodic.")
- 12:03, 27 July 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+81) . . Loose Canon (→Page 4)
- 17:38, 24 July 2011 (diff | hist) . . (-206) . . Community Demoman strategy (→Grenade Launcher: Removed a tip that's totally incoherent. If there's an advantage to deliberately denying yourself direct hits against a distracted enemy, please explain it.)
- 17:36, 24 July 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+33) . . Community Demoman strategy (→Scottish Resistance: Calling SR better "on defense" is very arguable. Changed to less controversial note that it's better for creating and managing bomb traps.)
- 00:32, 2 July 2011 (diff | hist) . . (-13) . . Rogue's Col Roule (→Bugs: Multiple explanations if it's unintentional. Rather than limit it to a 'glitch,' shortening to imply any range of unintentional reasons (e.g. oversight, glitch etc))
- 15:39, 19 April 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+98) . . Portal 2
- 14:56, 14 April 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+264) . . Community Scout strategy (→Sun-on-a-Stick)
- 01:24, 31 January 2011 (diff | hist) . . (-1) . . m Engineer match-ups (Use standardized language. (See instances of 'while' everywhere else.))
- 01:22, 31 January 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+2) . . m Bleeding
- 18:35, 30 December 2010 (diff | hist) . . (+6) . . m Crusader's Crossbow (Minor but important clarification. Disguised spies on your own team will still be healed.)
- 18:11, 18 December 2010 (diff | hist) . . (-17) . . m Prince Tavish's Crown (Why do people always feel compelled to say 'blatant/obvious' reference? Leave subjective judgments out.)
- 04:43, 18 December 2010 (diff | hist) . . (-14) . . m Napper's Respite (This really doesn't seem like the right word. What stereotype is reflected in wearing a nightcap? Certainly nothing that we can be sure applies to the Pyro.)
- 04:40, 18 December 2010 (diff | hist) . . (+273) . . Community Scout strategy (→Map Specific)
- 04:30, 18 December 2010 (diff | hist) . . (+289) . . Community Scout strategy (→Crit-a-Cola)
- 04:22, 18 December 2010 (diff | hist) . . (-304) . . Community Scout strategy (→Crit-a-Cola: Is this even really a 'tactic' in any sense of the word?)
- 04:21, 18 December 2010 (diff | hist) . . (+154) . . Community Scout strategy (→Scattergun)
- 04:16, 18 December 2010 (diff | hist) . . (-1) . . m Community Scout strategy (→Shortstop)
- 04:13, 18 December 2010 (diff | hist) . . (+60) . . Crusader's Crossbow
- 03:59, 18 December 2010 (diff | hist) . . (+54) . . Buffalo Steak Sandvich
- 03:58, 18 December 2010 (diff | hist) . . (+56) . . Warrior's Spirit
- 03:57, 18 December 2010 (diff | hist) . . (+4) . . Brass Beast
- 16:17, 12 December 2010 (diff | hist) . . (-14) . . m Double Cross (Use consistent style throughout. (Notice repeated use of "while.") Also generally avoid archaic words.)
- 16:15, 12 December 2010 (diff | hist) . . (-2) . . m Demoman match-ups (Missed a few)
- 16:14, 12 December 2010 (diff | hist) . . (-1) . . m Demoman match-ups (Maintain concistent style throughout. (See various instances of 'while'.) Also generally avoid archaic variants.)
- 16:09, 12 December 2010 (diff | hist) . . (-3) . . m Defense (Use consistent style throughout (see numerous uses of "while" and "offense" or "defense.") Also generally avoid archaic variants.)
- 16:07, 12 December 2010 (diff | hist) . . (-1) . . m Classes (→Speed: Use consistent style throughout (see numerous uses of "while.") Also generally avoid archaic variants.)
- 23:10, 27 November 2010 (diff | hist) . . (+149) . . Community Scout strategy (→Shortstop)
- 23:08, 27 November 2010 (diff | hist) . . (+180) . . Community Scout strategy (→Crit-a-Cola)
- 23:05, 27 November 2010 (diff | hist) . . (-1) . . m Crit-a-Cola (Use consistent style throughout (see numerous uses of "while.") Also generally avoid archaic variants.)
- 23:04, 27 November 2010 (diff | hist) . . (-1) . . m Cloak (→Invisibility Watch: Use consistent style throughout (see "while") earlier. Also generally avoid archaic variants.)
- 23:02, 27 November 2010 (diff | hist) . . (-2) . . m Coldfront (→Locations & Strategy: Use consistent language style (Compare use of "whilst" vs. "defense") and generally avoid archaic variants.)
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